It really wasn't too bad.
It really wasn't, especially being one of your first Flash projects. It would have been cool if the graphics were more carefully laid out, and if there were a little more gameplay involved, but all in all, I'd say this at least deserves to remain on Newgrounds.
OH. With one exception. I'm fairly certain - though not entirely so - that this game was rated 13+...and there are penises. I would suggest either taking the penises out, or rating the game 18+ for nudity. Just letting you know. XD